Snapshots of Downtown
the scar of crumbling bricks, dangling
slabs of wood, pipe, and rebar
dirt smoothed rough and uneven
over the city’s secret doorways
into passages into
nothing,
the pigeons packed tighter than life
on ledges so thin they fade
only one street north, another building
hollowed out and spilling infrastructure intestines
sad trails of steel and concrete
echoing the mute pain of this vacant lot
at my feet, a single white feather
floating haphazardly in a clump of dead autumn leaves
when I touch them,
they crumble with a brittle snap
but the feather
remains
a camo cowboy passes me without a pause,
smelling of cigarettes and stale tortilla chips
dressed like that, he must be
a hero to someone,
even if only to himself
when I step inside,
the women speaking loudly and pompously
of Art suddenly whisper
dimmed stagelights: waiting
to be filled with sound and substance; for now
the room is holding its breath in silence
as a single candle wavers between life and death
on an abandoned tabletop, tossing the reflection
of light
onto the windowglass
in the reflection,
the light is steady
two trains crash by at once,
their thunder extending much further
into the distance than their own length
crushing the night
with cacaphony
everybody on 1st Ave speeds
empty tables of romance,
candlelit for two and begging
for purpose
an older couple in leather jackets leave
the restaurant to
dance a few turns on the sidewalk
beneath the streetlamps, the
stars, the towering night



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January 12, 2009 at 8:34 pm
psumommy
Hi, I started coming by during December Views…this is wonderful, I can completely see and feel everything you’re describing. I love the feel.
And also- I was born in Spokane. I only lived there until I was 3, but feel an odd special connection with it.
January 13, 2009 at 6:20 am
jessica
oh your words tell a vivid story…I can see everything…what a great day it must have been